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Teen Poetry #8

Dawn at midnight

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2007-10-24 02:28 AM

This is an old one of mine that I treasure, but I don't think its quite right. Maybe I'm just being paranoid. Anyways, enjoy!

Radiant Dawn

Skies grieved by clouds so gray,
shrouding sun and moon all day.
A breeze so sad, a sigh so cold,
a grip so mighty, an unending hold.

Come dawn these clouds subside,
receding like an ocean’s tide.
Revealing skies set ablaze,
lifting eyes and cloudy haze.

A beacon of hope, a brand-new day,
gone is the sky grieved by gray.
A wind so daring, a breath so bold,
a grip now spent, a relinquished hold.

The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
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1 posted 2007-10-24 07:37 PM

wow I do like this one.. it's got a nice flow. Seems like you are doing great in these pages of blue

hope to read more soon
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2007-10-24 08:52 PM

Thanks for the encouragment. This poem was a hassle for me to write, but it holds a special place in my heart.

Andrew

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