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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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drowning, im all alone will i be missed ill never have the chance to give you all i promised so please forgive me as i say goodbye please dont forget me keep me in mind if it has to come to this im sorry hey baby have you heard ive gone missing without a word are you worried do you even care or is it a burden you cant bear |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Correct me if I'm wrong. Your words, at first, seem to be speaking of suicide. But you seem to be speaking of something else. Nice choice of words: "hey baby have you heard ive gone missing without a word" Just curious... Are these lyrics to a song? The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
yes they are lyrics. but, as you know, poetry can use words that have diffrent meanings to each person that reads it, (and if its good) it lets you walk away with a certain message. thats whats so great about it. and i was just talking about going missing without a trace |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I think i'd notice if u went missing.. I dont need to ppl to disappear in one year.. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
haha im not goin anywhere |
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