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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
Why were you so fast to leave? Then why did you return? I never know how you really feel You still have much to learn When you appeared I wanted to stay away I already had my heart broken Why should it hurt more that day? So when you came I kept my distance Yet you broke down the walls I gave up without much persistance It made me confused Yet i let it all go on I wanted to cry But it made me happy for the first time in so long I don't know if you like me I know i still love you But since you won't show how you feel I don't know what to do You act like you still have feelings Yet you won't make the move Are you scared I won't take you back Because I'm so confused? Well I don't know if i would You've hurt me so many times Yet I miss you so much I need you in my life I want you in my arms again But that past seems so far away I wish it would all come back But "if" and "when" i cannot say You once said you loved me But i Don't think that was true You played me like those guitars you play It left me empty, sad, and blue I told you those three words And you treated it like dirt You didn't even care what I had given up That really really hurt! I wish that fight had never happened Then everything would be okay Maybe if you still cared for me You would have been here and stayed I love you That's what I'm trying to say What else can i do But go on in life and pray? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oh wow I really liked this...Nicely written Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx! i wrote it for a skool report that was due in 5 minutes....got an A. lol  |
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Angel101¢¾! Junior Member
since 2007-10-21
Posts 48Lost in pain |
nice!! Its kayla |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
did u get your heeart broken or somethin |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
that was cute.. well writen..specially in only 5 minutes.. thats sum skill right there..lol uhm..so yea i think this might read a little better if u had it seperated into stanzas..just an opinion..but anyways..props ¢¾jess |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
justanotherstorm: yep that happened too. crazy thing is im still in love. latteaddict213: thank u!!! yeah i normally do stanzas but this time i forgot... thanx again |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
what thats crazy y this persons a ..... yeah y u still love em |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
not their not they are just really unexperianced |
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