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Teen Poetry #8

Your Words (I Miss)

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2007-10-15 11:12 PM

I miss the weight of your words,

holding my attention stagnant in focused glow.

I miss the weight of your words,

perpetuating beauty in little and a little in beauty.

I miss the weight of those words,

escaping known worlds of wisdom into the unknown.

I miss the weight of those words,

Like knives with piercing qualities digging through my pride.

I'll always miss the weight and the will in your words,

shedding light on significant reality crumbling

our existence.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-16 10:47 PM

Adam I really liked this one it was so sweet... and not in the mushy sweet way. The kind that really means something.
Krysti

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