Teen Poetry #8 |
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lately... |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
lately im hiding and im crying uncontrollably lately im falling faster will you catch me i'll put strength in your hands just give me a chance what do i do, is it me or is it you harsh words fill my mind but i bite my tongue thats all i hide but they're not mine no hurt comes with pride but your not blind so tie me up tare off my mask you'll find the same eyes staring back cuz i dont hide my heart from you lately im angry and im raging uncontrollably lately im falling faster than gravity what do i do its not me and its not you i sit here dreaming that im sitting here screaming but i can only sit in silence crying til im dried out i know your far away but im worried that you'll hear me and im worried that you'll walk through the door and see me bleeding so tie me up tare off my mask you'll find the same heart staring back cuz i dont hide my eyes from you lately im raging and breaking more than my mind seek and you shall find but dont get too close dont get inside i just need time how do i let go when ive heard more words than i need to know but they're not mine no hurt comes with pride but you're not blind so tie me up tare off my mask you'll find the same loving staring back cuz i dont hide. {in a million years i wont be over you} |
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nicole leigh Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44Eau Clair Wisconson |
that was rly good NIKKI |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
it was a little hard to read, but it was probably just me, lol =] but it showed such passion, and i liked it =] there's more to living than being alive |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I loved this. Another one I like by you... Krysti |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow it read well and it was just a gorgeous poem so well written with such emotion i loved it |
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