Teen Poetry #8 |
:: LEaVeS aND THe WiiND :: |
forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
leaves move around and fly above my head cool winds blow abstract, and turn my nose red oh yes, this season has finally arrived you can feel it in the air, and see it in the skiies colors around me are falling from the trees around in circles, my hair runs with the breeze echoing laughter is open faded fields where anything and everything seems too good to be real the sun is barely in the sky painting colors as it goes shining eyes scream what only autumn's freedom knows above us fades to black, sharing it's tiny shimmering dreams such a beautiful background matching your eyes that brightly gleam i would give up everything to live in this day holding your hand, if only it would stay this elaborate scene has rhythm, it has rhyme baby, your hearts beating stops all sense of time. ~bec there's more to living than being alive |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
just seeing if commenting on my post will make the picture change... there's more to living than being alive ~Anberlin |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
wow this was really great...it really described my love of fall...good work I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
FALL iiS DEFiiNATELY MY FAVORiiTE SEASON <3 IT JUST MAKES ME FEEL SO HAPPY =] AND ii WAS TRYiiNG TO WRiiTE HOW iiT MAKES ME FEEL, BUT ii STiiLL CANT CAPTURE THE EMOTiiON... AND THANX =] there's more to living than being alive ~Anberlin |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
yes you did it! haha i remember talking about you wanting to write this.. C: its really great. you definitely did it extremely well! -ris |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
oh ya, on the roof at like 2 or 3 in the morning, freezing coldnesssssss! haha, jk--it wasn't that cold, but ya i member =]... thanx =]...and its talking about my boyfriend.. *] wink wink...lol...the one i talk about all the time...haha...im so stupid =)P there's more to living than being alive ~Anberlin |
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