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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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0 posted 2007-10-06 03:33 PM


You said you’d never leave me
Yet now I’m all alone
You don’t know how much that hurt
Now I cry every night in the dark

You said that you would be there
In my times of need
But that’s when you got scared
And totally abandoned me

Now you’re saying that you were wrong
And that you made a mistake
But how can I believe you
I can’t let my heart break

Again and again I take you back
Happily, I forgive
But if you keep hurting me
I will no longer want to live

I’m sorry; I still love you
But I can’t hurt another time
Maybe one day our paths will cross
And love won’t be so blind


© Copyright 2007 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-10-06 04:49 PM


Sometimes it's best to move on. good luck with everything I hope your heart heals. great poem
Krysti

BloodFairy18
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since 2008-02-22
Posts 12
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2 posted 2008-03-21 10:36 PM


I really like this poem , thanks for commenting on my poem aswell , im proud of you for not taking that person back , i got cheated on and took the person back , i know how hard it is to say no when that person you love hurts you and then says that it was a mistake and bla bla bla , i also hope this poem is really about you cause if not il sound pretty stupid eh lol
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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3 posted 2008-03-22 12:48 PM


Love this leah.. great write hun
justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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4 posted 2008-03-22 04:48 PM


i remember this
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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5 posted 2008-03-22 06:23 PM


bloodfairy: hey thanx. and yes this was true about me ..lol so dont feel retarded. but yea. thanks again

kyrsti: thanx! its sooo old tho lol

justanotherstorm: yep i memeber it too.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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