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Teen Poetry #8

Knight in Shining Armour

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2007-10-03 11:30 PM

Everything I say
Goes bad
It's you
I should have come to
Not my own conclusions
Do I truely have to admit
All the wrongs
I did commit
What I said
Was wrong and hateful
Everything began to shatter
Small shards
Began to cut
So far down
To hit my past
But like my knight
That wears shining armour
You mended everything
Down to the last paper cut

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-10-04 04:33 PM

these lines were amazing!

Everything began to shatter
Small shards
Began to cut
So far down
To hit my past

it really hit the poetic portion of my heart and said "wow!".

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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