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Before Dawn Breaks
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Before Dawn Breaks |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Before Dawn Breaks Before dawn breaks The stars are at their best I couldn’t be happier As the breath of the morning Becomes my own Orion and the morning star Moon and the fog of sunrise Surround my world so carefully I learn to be more Than a silly girl alone Before dawn breaks The world is at peace in the near morning Too early for evil And just right for the good But words do it no justice Watching their travels Day by day West of me leaving My stars that guide me Traveling out of my range It’s a glorious morning Yet there is no sun yet The frozen blades near shatter Underneath the weight of me And there is not a moment so peaceful as this "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i liked it alot my favourite line was West of me leaving it was just so i don't know but it just caught my eye like crazy although the only thing i did find a bit wrong with the poem is that it seemed not to have a present flow but that might just be me |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
wow, this was amazing...i relate to it in a differemt way though. it reminds me of hitch hiking, when your stuck "before dawn breaks" and i always want to get frustrated, but theres too much beauty. wow. |
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