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Teen Poetry #8

The Cello (Incomplete)

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2007-09-26 07:02 AM

Sing golden cello,
Bow to aesthetic chorus
and scream, oh scream
for agony and beauty,
overwhelm thy scenes and pray for
souls unsoothed,

I beg you, laugh, oh to laugh
A joyous solo, a pious placidity
For the unmistakable and the mellowed,
Tell me a story oh wood and bow,
Dig up this well from fettered glee
And teach thy soul to inspire
That which is supposed before thy chorus

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

1 posted 2007-09-26 04:10 PM

excellent write...great pace, great language

-J

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