Teen Poetry #8 |
forever and always |
Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
~needs work~ "can you come out and play?" we were barely ever apart always joined by hands a simple peice of art. "Tell me, tell me, tell me!" we would plead as we shared secrets and swore secrecy in creed. "Are you alright?" You were always there for me, i always had your back together we could be free. "forever and always" we promised that night. now i lie here alone, crying into the moonlight. "Sorry i forgot to call" we lost control of everything, we became too far gone, to tend to such a blessing. "Haven't talked to you in ages" our past seems so far away oh, how i would give up anything to go back to yesterday. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
to go back to yesterday.~ Ahhh how many times I have wished for the same thing this was beautifully written, I loved it all the flow was a little off in some parts but for the most part it was good... Krysti |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
wow... if only i could go back to yesterday! definately a wish many have had, this was really great, i liked it alot, i dont know why it only has one comment on it! -bec- there's more to living than being alive ~Anberlin |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
hello dear leanne, you know i have a friend named leanne, so when ever i see your name or read your stuff i always see her face. but i liked this. it was lovely. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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