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Teen Poetry #8

Melt Away

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-09-14 08:09 PM

im sitting here in this dull dark room
drinking in everything,
from the burbon to cheap champaine
i think i may be going insane
but ive got time to kill
and nothing to do

the windows open and i dont care
that all these things are are broken and torn
i dont think its ever okay
this smell wont wash away

are there things that i should know
are the stings being cut, should i let go
before all of this just melts away

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2007-09-14 11:06 PM

Wow... this is really good! Very dark and twisty... It made me want to give you a hug, lol! You know I'm here if you ever need to talk. Otherwise, incredible.

We do not write because we want to,
we write because we have to.
-W. Somerset Maugham

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-09-15 01:49 AM

i really liked this...

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