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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
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0 posted 2007-09-11 03:15 PM


I watch
As another stare goes away
The things I hear
Don't stop
The thoughts
Just keep popping in my head
I try to shake them
But they just stay
I see you
And wish I asked you
But it's too late
I hope you find out
How much I care
Because your always on my mind
And I watch
As another stare pops up


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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is
1 posted 2007-09-12 12:07 PM


i really liked this one
i dont really get the title...but that could just be me...im not good with titles...
nicely done :: thumbs up ::

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

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