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pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-08-14 12:52 PM

An angel sent to earth
As a punishment not deserved
Suffering so much pain,
Torn apart by wounds no one can heal

Tiny angel, so protected
Tiny angel, speaking not
Tiny angel, so pure, so innocent
Carries scars never to be forgot

Precious little angel
Shuts herself away
She needs to be alone
For the remainder of today

Tiny, precious angel
Feels lost without her wings
So she wraps herself in blankets
Though she knows no inner warmth they'll bring

Pretty, baby angel
So loved, yet so alone
No one understands
So her silence they can't condone

Your pretty baby angel
Loves you all so very much
So she shows you not with words
But through her light and loving touch

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-08-14 03:11 PM

umm made me think, i think we all feel that way.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-08-14 09:55 PM

"Your pretty baby angel
Loves you all so very much
So she shows you not with words
But through her light and loving touch"

I absolutely loved this. And yes, i believe people do really feel that way sadly. Wonderful write

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

3 posted 2007-08-15 04:10 PM

its VERY good i liked it alot my fav was the last stanza though

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-08-28 08:38 PM

oh wow now that was a beautiful poem

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-09-11 03:26 PM

this was a very good poem i think one the best and it just was lovely i loved especially the way it ended

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