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Teen Poetry #8

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Tango
New Member

since 2007-09-07

Posts 6
USA, California

0 posted 2007-09-07 05:41 PM

I watch you in the corner
Not a very popular guy
I wonder what you're really like
And why you are so shy
If I were you, and you were me
Would you feel the same curiosity
About the one who is seen, but not heard

Ignored is a good word
For us, the one's who are alone
Unsure, our every step
For all of us I write this poem
I want to reach to all of my friends
The one's with whom friendship will never end
For you and me I make my call heard

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-09-08 12:20 PM

i have never been shy, but i've felt shy before. it's a sickening feeling. it must be a very hard trait to adapt to.

-Red

ps i hope you understood that, i'm still swooning from late nights that never end.

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2007-09-08 11:57 PM

I can understand this, because at one point I was definetly shy, I am not any more, but i know how that is like. Hopefully others can make their voices heard too.
M c ya at school monday.
read my stuff. You should read Reds too, shes really good.
RhIa

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-09-10 08:56 PM

awwwwwwww thanks rhia, that's so sweet of you.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-09-12 03:20 PM

=D really like this poem can realte so much.. how haunting

well Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy it here.
Krysti

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