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First Love |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104
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Its really unexplainable This feeling of which feels Like a rose drenched with pouring rain Pain is what it heals It never lets me down Although I hate to admit I think some call it love And cant get enough of it But I wish it would go away Yet never leave my heart Its hard to deal with I knew this from the start When you came into my life You put a spell on me You took hold of my heart Unlocked it, stole the key Which I have hid for so long For no one to find Afraid of what might happen If I crossed that line How can I give my heart to someone Who could never understand All the pain that I have been though All the trouble I have had With guys who I can’t trust Those who only lie Cheat steal and fight Who don’t care if I die So maybe now you understand Why I am so confused I’m not used to being cared about The way I am by you "in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop" |
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ResLife286 New Member
since 2007-09-02
Posts 7Canada |
WOW... thats just breath taking, makes sense of alot of things for me, me being a nice guy and all. |
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rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
wow...I know some people who need to read stuff like this...that was amazing, and yeah, breathtaking and all... Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
incredible. i loved it! library piece! -Red ps in one book i read miranda meant "in the coils of the snake" pretty much the goblin king's wife. long story short- i love your name. "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
just wanted to say sorry for my erratic-ness. i read back over my comment an di sound like a fruit loop. lol -Red |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
Thanks for all the comments, and thats cool about my name, I never knew that hehe well thanks again "in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop" |
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Sexy_Tator_Tot Junior Member
since 2007-08-31
Posts 42Arkansas |
Wow, this is really good. I wish I could write something like that. You say a lot in the first few words...Cant wait to read more! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this was really good I loved it Krysti |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this was amazing and i loved how it just flowed so well nice rhymning scheme |
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