The Song of Thoughts Alone

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Teen Poetry #8

The Song of Thoughts Alone

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2007-08-23 04:20 PM

You take something
And you make a story out of it
You take a little
And make it fit to play for a crowd

There’s so much that I
Have learned to lose
And maybe some day
It’ll boomerang back to me

Nothing’s ever what it seems
You get up when you bleed
There is nothing
That can stand in your way

I don’t care
Why the colors turn to grey
I don’t mind
That I’m losing my way

And there’s something miraculous
About the change of day
That I would miss
Even if I could stay

But the simple things are gone
So it’s time to move on

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (08-24-2007 07:44 AM).]

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-08-23 08:53 PM

I love this! Definately one of my faves by you. For a title I might go with "Move On"
or something to that effect. just a suggestion. Great write!!!! gOING IN MY LIBRARY!

Rerra

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-08-24 07:43 AM

wow, i wrote that. it kinda came in a blur and i typed it faster than i've ever typed anything before it just flew into my mind and from my mind to the page. wow. thanks!

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-25 11:35 AM

Wow I like this red(even if you don't remember writing it)
Krysti

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