Teen Poetry #8 |
Can I be your butterfly? |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Can I be your butterfly? When life gets rough Can I help you get by? Will you smile If you stop a while To watch me as I fly? Can I be your butterfly Wings the color of prettiest blue? I’ll ask God for all the happiness in the world Just so I can give it to you. Can I be your butterfly Angel in disguise? Can I be your butterfly Bring so much joy Yet be so small in size? Well, if I can be your butterfly Will you be my sky? We’ll watch life in awe and wonder And stay so high, high, high… |
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Yogurt Junior Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 18Canada |
Thats a beautiful poem your really good |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yes. This was truly amazing so sweet Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
It really is very pretty. I think you should try to turn it into a song. |
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EmilySian Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 21England |
Really beautiful, and pretty! |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Absolutly stunning!! I loved this So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
vundurbar -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
i absolutly loved this piece. it was very well written. great jobs! |
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