Crying more Raindrops, Raining more Tears

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Teen Poetry #8

Crying more Raindrops, Raining more Tears

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-08-12 02:47 PM

The skies are grey
But it’s not raining
I need something to vocalize
My heart’s unheard complaints

If I start to cry
Will the skies comply
Will they rain down more tears
For me to shed?

If the sky starts to rain
Will I come to terms with this pain
Will I know that it’s alright
And that I have the strength
To get through tonight?

If my eyes leak raindrops
Will you understand
You now hold my soul
In the palm of your hand?

pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

1 posted 2007-08-15 03:46 PM

i guess its ok but its not your best

i prefered crying raindrops, raining tears

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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