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Put A Pen In Your Hand
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Put A Pen In Your Hand |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Have you ever watched a sunset Sink below the trees, Watched as it moves lower, Blessed with blinding ease? Have you ever seen a rainbow, Or two, or even three And seen not a symbol, But a promise to humanity? Have you ever felt the feeling When you finally understand The power you possess When you hold a pen in your hand? Have you ever heard that song That breaks your heart in two Apologizes sincerely Then sews it up for you? Have you ever known the feeling That no one understands If you’ve got something to say And need someone to listen, You could start the next hit band But first, Put A Pen In Your Hand |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this poem just sounded so cool when you read it fabulous |
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Rainbowrose Junior Member
since 2007-08-11
Posts 11 |
I think it is beautiful,I've had the same personal experience. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
This was amazing the flow was great the concept was even better so all in all you have one amazing talent  Krysti. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I loved the flow...it was amazing. I really enjoyed reading this So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
ok i LOVED this poem and the idea behind it totally rocks  "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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