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Teen Poetry #8

Or Even A Friend

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-08-07 04:20 PM

This broken heart
My bleeding eyes
See right through
Your feeble disguise

The key to my heart
I've swallowed, it's gone
Because I knew
To you it didn't belong

I'm on my own
And I'm just fine
Won't lower to your ways
I'd rather stick to mine.

I don’t ever wanna see you
Or feel your touch again
Because I know you could never be
A Lover or even a friend

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

1 posted 2007-08-07 04:27 PM

I adore this poem. I'm glad your not letting that person hurt you. That your keeping them out. Very good -Tara

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-07 06:50 PM

Woah definately one of my fsvorites by you the floe was flawless. I loved this
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-08-07 10:11 PM

"This broken heart
My bleeding eyes
See right through
Your feeble disguise"

Pen, this is amazing!! I love it! And sometimes it's best to feel this way rather than let them hurt you again

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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