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sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

0 posted 2007-07-22 02:56 AM

Why me?
I cant understand why
I take it you dont know me.
But i wish you did.
I really need you now
do you not see?
what can I say
im caught in the hands of fate..

nothing more than the cold rough screams of my aching heart.

Just forget about me.
dont think or breath
just walk on by as if you dont see.

Nothing can hurt me more
than the painful stabs and horrible scars
that remind me of the times I pleaded for you.

I cant forgive.
I cant forget.
I want my childhood back.

when things were easy and simple.
but NO!
you took that away from me.
made me grow up before my time.

Now all I can do is sit in the corner
Rock back and forth
and wish someone would just love me.
FOR ME!

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-22 09:11 AM

"Nothing can hurt me more
than the painful stabs and horrible scars
that remind me of the times I pleaded for you."

I liked it, and welcome to pip

Nice first post.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2007-07-22 01:03 PM

Welcome to pip!!
This poem was really good I liked it

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-23 06:56 PM

and wish someone would just love me.
FOR ME! ~

woah I loved this, can relate so much. Welcome to Passions. great 1st post

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

4 posted 2007-07-27 11:13 AM

Thanx guys...
your responses are AWESOME!!
thank you..

Gurl_unknown_11
Junior Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 17
california

5 posted 2008-02-10 06:16 PM

wow,when i red this thats all i could say WOW
its an awesome poem

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

6 posted 2008-02-11 01:23 AM

Great poem, its amazing to see new talent this good. I hope to see more of your work.

--Nevermore

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

7 posted 2008-02-11 11:37 AM

wow!great job! loved it!! welcome to passions

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-19 05:48 PM

Enjoyed the Poem!

ARCTIC WIND
Life isn't just given to you
Life is about Creating it ......
-Arctic Wind

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