Glass isn’t always Clear

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Teen Poetry #8

Glass isn’t always Clear

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-07-12 06:51 PM

Glass isn’t always Clear

Wait, don’t move
You know
I’m coming for you

So spread the lies
They’re thick as glass
But not so clear

I’m coming to make you spill
The truth out
Like flowing water

Come clean and be clean
The sinner’s words replaced
Smashed like glass to dust

Beauty has no bounds
But then
Neither does anything else

Kiss goodbye all you know
Because nothing
Will be the same anymore

Learn to curb your appetite
Of things you can’t have
Because I’m out of bounds

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-12 10:23 PM

hmmm i couldn't really understand this poem it was very confusing and disjointed maybe it was the flow i'm not sure but i couldn't get a clear idea of what the whole thing was about but i can't wait for your next poem

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-13 10:27 AM

sorry about that, this was one of those feeling-inside-of-me-that-would-burst-if-i-didn't-write-it poems so i don't know what it means or even really what it says for that matter it's just feeling on paper.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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