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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
~This is from a guy's P.O.V... Lol obviously.Be honest, please, I'm kind of experimenting with it still.Thanks!~ Whether she's all dressed up, or wearing nothing but a smile. Whether she goes to bed in a negligee, or a ratty old T-shirt of mine. She could be puffy-eyed and crying, at the end of a love scene, Or tossing her head back and laughing, saying how much she loves me. It doesn't really matter to me, being a dork or deeply meaningful. Every little thing she does makes her, to me, simply beautiful. When she's brushing her teeth in the morning, making that face in the mirror. It's times like that, she just doesn't get, why I just need to be near her. When we're watching a movie, she bursts into tears, and cries into my shirt. She thinks she looks like a wet cat, I think she's so sexy it physically hurts. It doesn't really matter to me, being a dork or deeply meaningful. Every little thing she does makes her, to me, simply beautiful. Ready for bed or a night on the town, just a smile can make me want her. No matter the time, or where we are, it's impossible to keep my eyes off her. It really doesn't mater to me, being a dork or deeply meaningful. Every little thing she does makes her, to me, simply beautiful. I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I think it was really good! Especially considering it was from a guys point of view  Although, i'm not sure i know any guys that would say that about someone...lol, i am very glad i read it!! Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow this was so amazing but *sniff sniff* I wish guys were actually like that hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
This was really good.. I agree with hunnie tho... if only guys could realle be like that...*sigh* this poem rocked One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
the poem rocked i lved it so much and i agree with the others i wish real guys could be like this or atleast show it in some way |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
NO body knows how to be a man like woman. lol. it's painfully true. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
There are guys like this... there really are they dont all say it quite as sweet as you put it in here but most will say it eventually if hes the one. -Laura |
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helen.kan New Member
since 2007-07-13
Posts 1 |
awww. yes. if only, if only. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i find it funny that no guys have anything to say about this lol -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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ChristopherRobin Junior Member
since 2007-07-13
Posts 11UK |
Excellent, simply excellent, must have took you a fair while to compose, one to win a ladies heart. I hope you keep a copy of this forever, in many years to come this may easily be very popular indeed. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
omg, i totally loved this!!!!!!!!! it was so well written and I could almost visualize little scenes in my mind...I love when poems do that. You did a great job. Pen |
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