Dangerous Intentions- Part II

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Dangerous Intentions- Part II

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-07-11 06:02 PM

Dangerous Intentions- Part II

In the moonlight- I can see her
Tossing petals from her boat
Now the time is nearing
I prepare the fatal note

I’m going to steal her from her life
To place she never knew
A surprise I have in store
The one that she is due

How great a treasure she will be
Just perfect for my plan
A strong young maiden still tense
She’s fighting all she can

My note is quickly filling
There is an errand I must attend
I’m sending off the letter
That will put her normal life at end

You must know- I would never harm
The beautiful woman I watch
Her life has been ticking by
This experience ticks one notch

Now you must know
What it is you are to read
My heartfelt and important job
Is, yes, a righteous deed

My intentions are just and noble
A cause for more than me
Needed in my kingdom dear
A bride is what she’ll be

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-11 08:22 PM

That wasn't the end i was expecting! It threw me for a loop

I liked it!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-11 09:17 PM

just wait- it's still not finished- you don't truly think i would let my story not finish it's self.

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-12 01:02 AM

wow I was not expecting this ending either woah

I liked this ...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-18 01:42 PM

phwoar that was just amazing i think you have finally found a happy medium in poetry and found the way to write these dangerous intentions poems are the best i have seen from you yet

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