Teen Poetry #8 |
Dangerous Intentions – Part I |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Dangerous Intentions – Part I Watching . . . waiting . . . Yet she hasn’t made her move The busy little girl with the honey hair Sacred of my face in her tree’s groove Walking alone and looking behind Somehow she knows of me I don’t want her to I don’t even know how that could be I almost feel sorry There’s really nothing she can do But what will eventually happen Is surly something she can work through Sometimes I wonder what she’s thinking But I will likely never know What I’m planning is so awful Her worst nightmare falls, scale-wise, low It will ruin her every perfect plan A future of great things shattered Maybe it’s fear that she harbors Not that it has truthfully mattered She’s such a mystery Beyond my comprehension I love her I know it But she yields none of her attention If only she knew of my plans She would hate me ‘til her end But maybe my love is selfish And I’d only play pretend "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ps you guys i haven't decided how many parts there are yet- but this just wasn't finished and i didn't want to make it incredibly long, and it wasn't finished, and honestly my imagination was pretty spent tonight; so i will update more parts hopefully ya'll be looking for them -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Now i want to know what his intentions are...nicely done I really liked it. I can't wait to read the next one. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah I like this a lot I can't wait to read part 2 hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
good start to your trilogy of poems i can't wait to read the others |
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