Teen Poetry #8 |
Closest Thing |
WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
~A lot of people commented on Simply Beautiful that guys aren't REALLY like that.Which is, unfortunately, true.And it got me thinking about what they're really like, and here is how I interpreted it... Enjoy...~ The way her hips sway when she walks, The way her lips move when she talks. She oozes sexy out every pore, There’s no way I could want her more. But as much as I want her, I’m still not sure If I’m ever going to really love her. She knows that, and she says it’s okay, But I know it will get to her one day. She’s a fantastic girl, she’s a lot of fun, But I’m fairly sure she’s not the one. She’ll find some guy who sees her beauty, And who’ll appreciate it better than me. We’re all lovey-dovey right now, though, And we both know where it’s going to go. We’ll say, “Goodbye,” “Hey, we had fun.” And it’ll be over, it’ll be done. No, we’re not in love, that’s a fact, But it doesn’t really bug us, that. And it may not warrant a diamond ring, But for not being love, it’s the closest thing. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
that's the sickest saddest excuse that i've ever heard of a man. well done. perfect, just like the owrst of them, and the worst of women too. sick and maddening, throwing away life times and happy times for one times. sick sad pitiful- perfect in portrial. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Lol, yes! That's it I really enjoyed it. And i actually do know guys who think like that!! You're very brave to try and get in thier heads...and you did a good job of that So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! this is truly the amaing truth.. I love this it is one of my fav. by you.. but hey I gotta stop saying that for all of your poems:P really great hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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