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Teen Poetry #8

But Blue (My Soul)

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-07-10 01:48 PM

I won't fear tomorrow
Tired of living just for today
I wanna know what happens
After I find my way

The road is ever winding
Darkness at each turn
I suddenly find the light
And I watch as my skin burns

I can see my heart now
View my soul through and through
And the colour is amazing
It is not red, nor black,
But Blue

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-12 01:04 AM

one word Woah...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2007-07-12 01:49 AM

I really liked this! the last two lines just ended it perfectly. Thanks for sharing

-Laura

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-07-12 03:44 PM

wow- that was different from anything else i've ever read- and you know what?!? i really liked it!

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

4 posted 2007-07-12 04:19 PM

Thanks guys!

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