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Teen Poetry #8

Thoughts of the Present

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-07-06 10:29 PM

Thoughts of the Present

I don’t even know- if you’re really there
I speak to myself out of wonder and fear
I hope against the odds that maybe one day
I’ll get the part I’ve wanted so bad to play

It’s a race against time, against flimsy and firm
I’ve known so many people, and yet my heart yearns
Feelings buried so deep don’t want to stay
They climb to my face- my heartache display

I feel so awful lately I don’t know why
My face feels ugly and my tears never run dry
My thoughts are broken like my wretched soul
It becomes apparent that this is my eternal role

I long for someone tangible- someone to call my own
Maybe that’s why I’m so tried in tone
My heart is reaching out as far as it can go
Please never let me lose control

My head is spinning with the thoughts of tomorrow
I hope that it will cease all my sorrow
And the clock ticks to ten
Everything is over again

I fear that I must now go on

If love were a picture that painting would never be finished.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-07 10:22 AM

Wow! I really liked the endind. Such a sad poem! When i read it, i could almost feel your pain!! Nice write

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

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