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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
 Empty, alone Covered with wanted skin. Fallen to the harsh light of day no one here to save me Mindless, trapped All is left is an empty tree You, my love. is my only save point.  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sweet words and I do must say a picture perfect Poem Nice one! The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Wow!! The picture and the words go nicely together...Nice wording in this short work. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Star - the words go so well together with the graphic. I like this... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
very artistic and expressive! |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Helmut, thanksss |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
gc,  |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
bill, really? thank u |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
a romantic heart, thanks dear |
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