Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Bounces |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
No matter how hard you throw him, Bones is going to bounce. Bones is just super resilient, and way elastic. Bones doesn’t have a plastic bone in his skinny body. Bones will bend, but he snaps right back, just like the finest piece of spring steel. He picked that up from Mom. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just heard a discussion about resilience among psychologists today. Your poem would have fit perfectly into their reflections. This describes Bones' qualities with great imagery. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Thanks for reading, and your interesting comment. I hope Bones came out smelling like a rose in their interesting discussion. Love Bobby |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
In inspirational work Bobby, and a man to aspire to. I wish I was as strong as Bones, I've been broken several times. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Suncleaver, Bones has been broken so many times he's lost count. That's what life's about for most all of us. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
No matter how many ways he bounces, in the end, Bones will bounce "up" and he and mom inpires us all! art |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - Bones being resilent is a good thing, and to bounce back tells me he is a fighter when down... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bones is adaptable to all of his situations. He's very good at survival.....I admire him for that. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, I'm glad you liked the poem. Yes, the last bounce is always on the up side. There is no such thing as a negative bounce. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, Bones always gives a good fight. Thanks for the kind words. Bones says "Thanks". Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased you liked the poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, For the kind words on Bones. Survival has always been Bones main interest. He's never given up, or even played dead. Always on the bright side--it's good for business. Bobby |
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WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
I love this one. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks WindWalker11, I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this one. Bobby |
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