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Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

0 posted 2009-02-14 05:52 PM

He said goodbye
But my hair did not hear it.
Too shiny now it fragrants a welcome.
He said goodbye but my eyes did not hear
Too sparkling now they scan his return.
He said goodbye
But my ears did not hear it
Too longingly now they wait for his call.
Fingers...await the feel of desire.
Only my heart,ever alert to his whispers,
Heard and encased it in my casket of treasures...it's there now with
Words from my life filled with love.
My heart and my casket and I and my heartache
Sit,head bowed,on the stairway to my dungeon of despair.
I would lift the lid for one more touch of my treasure
But I cannot chance
Losing it
Too.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-02-14 06:42 PM

I don't believe we can ever prepare ourselves for the 'goodbye' ... this is a beautiful gifting from your heart.. thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

mein or meree thanhai
Junior Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 21

2 posted 2009-02-15 05:33 PM

once she promisd me..., she will pass miscalls whenever she remember me..., i got alot. now...evrynight...every days im waiting to hear that miscal... seconds..,hours days passed but. im waitng...i believ she cant forget me...., even she didnt remember..., my screen is empty like my mind. boshi...i know you can observe this feeling..... heard a gudbye..., a painful negligens.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2009-02-15 05:55 PM

Oooh, no one is ever prepared for that sad day when his/her loves grants them farewell.

Beautifully written poem yet very depressing.

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

4 posted 2009-02-15 08:27 PM

Bosharii2
Thank you for letting us glimpse the aching chaos of dispair and longing and desire that boils and burns inside you.
Now that you have let me in, let me see,
in some mysterios way through the computer,
somewhere THROUGH THESE BLUE PAGES,
you now have me.

Friendship is for Life, if not Forever.

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