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At Morn |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
Rough hewn castles, standing still keeping yet all harm at bay. Sorrow's fortress, however strong, succumbs upon the break of day. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful! You are right! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
If only the break of day could be a sure-fire guarantee one could break the fortresses of sorrow. Nice write! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Mysterious, poignant, intriguing, deep, beautiful . . . and much enjoyed! Owl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The boundary line between the heart and the mind runs thin but can be one of the most challenging to cross. Loved the wording and the way it makes the mind perk up when reading. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love the sunlight breaking over the wall in this one...well-captured in remarkable words... |
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