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of lover's pique |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was within the day dreams of my eyes the girl of your woman looked from her window she gave diamonds as glances to the dawning sky and then placed her lips as whispers along horizons the woman of your girl looked from her window too perhaps for the footprints of her lover there as the brim of her misting pathway she listened for heartbeats of galloping stallions there was a shivering of dew on the hedges a misting of shadows under branches and limbs as the soldier trees guarded her from passion and from the passing stranger with captured eyes her glances danced on tiptoes around and down searching secrets for answers in a lover's sound and of sudden there was as the lancer's pique blushed red and bold even in the midst of chivalry just a single moment's rose discreetly serpentined _______________ daark (forbidden) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
she listened for heartbeats of galloping stallions ~&~ She, and I, will probably always listen for that impending sound.  Loving it... thank you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..thanks for listening with your eyes.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Sigh, how beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks so much special lady friend |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love how you blur the lines...makes for very interesting reading |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo...it was a bit foggy and misty this am... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Awesome as always but these lines .... ---------------------------------------------- she gave diamonds as glances to the dawning sky and then placed her lips as whispers along horizons ---------------------------------------------- hold their own beauty and magic. Keep penning and I will keep reading. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks amigo Mark..I appreciate your reviews. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
aroused in passion her blushing outdoes a rose her thorns draw his blood. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my indi...I did imagine you licking the salt from this wound with that wicked smile...thanks babe |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know after I read your poems I have this urge to grab the Windex and clean my windows. You know just in case. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san....just leave them open a crack or so...thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
she gave diamonds as glances to the dawning sky and then placed her lips as whispers along horizons If I'd never read any of your work, never been entranced by your words, those two lines alone would have made me a fan. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmmmmm ms suthern..I am blessed that you found my pen, thanks lady!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"there was a shivering of dew on the hedges a misting of shadows under branches and limbs" makes one lick her lips seeking a last sweet drop stranger darlin' |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady1...it is always a pleasure to see your smile and your thirsty eyes, thanks babe |
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