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mein or meree thanhai
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since 2009-02-01
Posts 21


0 posted 2009-02-12 12:04 PM



I thought,
I can’t speak again..,
I lost my soul in the blaze...,

God is merciful,
He gave me back the soul
Which I love more...
Which, I can’t live without

When I heard the fire
I felt the meaning of loss
News were crammed red flame,
… Ashes of woods

They console me..,
I hope she will back
Dreamt many times her beautiful face,
And long hands waving at me,

Thanks god,
Thanks my friends
Thanks for all
Who, prayed for her

Dedicated to my Helen who live safely in Melbourne

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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2009-02-12 12:09 PM


This is lovely...
and I'm very glad your friend is safe.




Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-02-12 01:04 PM


Yo Mein or meree thanhai,

This is good work.  Melbourne is a great town.  I loved my stay there.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-12-2009 04:36 PM).]

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
3 posted 2009-02-12 03:17 PM


Very deep emotion expressed here, mein. I am glad the uncertainty and anxiety has passed.

art

Boshii2
Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146

4 posted 2009-02-17 07:55 AM


You are a beautiful man ,Mein or meree Thanhai
I would be happy with the scraps from your heart.

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