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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Foreign Language how could I ever tell you for words could never match my feelings they do not express true emotions inflection could not even come close for how do you describe heart beat or breath or the loss of it "The greatest glory in living lies not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall." |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like you're missing someone and expressing it beautifuly. Ida |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Helen, I wish I could convey as much feeling into my, loooong poems, as you do in yours. This one hit me like a 9 tons of hammers! Someone help, get these hammers off me!!! Thats okay, I just want to lay here a while anyway.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredible!! You pack a lifetime into a few words... with nary a wrinkle. Fantastic! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Helen - your words are so touching, and express what you're feeling inside... I like your writings... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
powerful write...great question...find myself nodding (mostly with adoration rather than knowledge) and still nodding...seeking the answer...still |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Tis true, how does one put that into words but then you made me think about the difficulty and how we're all trying to, that's what's so good. Eric |
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