Open Poetry #44 |
ADDICTED |
markita New Member
since 2009-02-11
Posts 7washington |
Behind my smile lies plies of cries The one that carried me for 9 months 9 long months Never knew being in her wound Ready to bloom That my life would cause so many sad wones That she would be ADDICTED to Something so strong Stronger than her own pride That can make her die That made me cry The one that changed my pampers The one that held me tight when I have nightmares ADDICTED. Never knew one day She would become my nightmare DAME. She lost her pride Her pride to something so strong… Something that can kill her That makes her all ugly inside That makes me want 2 hide… That makes me want to die.. Dame the one that carried me for 9 months 9 long months ADDICTED…2 DRUGS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip, dear markita! A sad first entry, it shows your pain for your Mother. No, don't hide, she loves you even in this difficult time, when she is crossing her own dark valley. Show her that you care, it is still the best therapy you know! And the sun will shine again one day. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Pips, Markita. It's a hard rock life pathway you've described. Wishing you well, and that she seeks help to end the drug addictions. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I lost my fiancee to heroin, you must convince her to seek help. It's the only chance you'll get, you can't beat drugs alone, she needs you and she needs professional help. Don't give up. And welcome, my friend. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
markita - read this with sadness. Too, too many are in the same situation due to drugs... Wish you well... BC |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
sad it is but don't give up. Never do The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very passionate writing... I'm glad you could get this out. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
helloooooooo and welcome. Except for the theme I like your style "plies of cries " is good. Really liked your whole first verse...looking forward to seeing your next effort. Boshii2 |
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