Open Poetry #44 |
leaning wind and stolen metal |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
we had discussions in too brief a momentary during those afternoons when it was ok to have just a little more love on our shirts as they had already been stained by some imagination without restrictions and desire that was cherished seemed to be almost the same but you kept trying to convince myself that yours might be broken and not that pretty you had caught me with my kickstand down leaning my metal against nonchalant waiting for you to say I could still try anyway to find out for myself about maybe places I said I wouldn't just ride off that easy since my sunsets had all been seen before and your flaws were more my kind of jewelry if you wouldn't mind giving them away perhaps or would you prefer that I just stole them ______________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Yep, you gotta steal 'em. And then you gotta give 'em back, to make it last. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"you had caught me with my kickstand down leaning my metal against nonchalant" Poetic justice? Grin, DS, you always gift us with unique and colorful images. I can see you standing there...seemingly 'nonchalant' yet seductively vulnerable. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, There's good money in stolen scrap metal. There always will be. Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan...give em back..shhhhh that would make them just a joy ride, thanks lady ________________ ms midnite, I guess I am pretty obvious sometimes, thanks ms ________________ BJ, thanks guy, this is more precious metal, high shimmer and slow molten |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Some things want to be stolen perhaps! It's a proof of desire. You play "forbidden" in such a captivating way, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend!! |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
mmmhmmm... daark n lovely |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D What can I say? You have touched something inside and rendered me (almost) speechless. You do so have a way about you. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nymph, thanks lady, you are always a smile _______________ ms ali-san, thank you little one, am pleased to play with your speech places |
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