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Across the centuries into eternity
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Across the centuries into eternity |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Across the centuries into eternity * The shore stretches just for us in solitude. With their wide open eyes the sun and the sky follow our every move. The waves play lazily. They dare to lick our feet and to swallow our laughter. You run ahead of me, a true whirlwind of freedom. I choose to step into your footprints, just an instant before the water does the same, filling our double trace with its teasing froth. Suddenly the water is quicker than me and you gain in distance. I then quietly sit in the sand allowing you to be the conductor of the game of life and harmony. The sun and you. The sky and you. The sea and you. The shore and you. The world and you. Your dance of freedom and me, the voice of love within your heart, whispering silently. The water carries without cease the echoes of our song resonating along this shore and over the sea’s vast expansion, infusing new life into our one soul, across the centuries into eternity. * |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
what a beautiful sea calypso stretching from your sea to mine  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Margherita, you desribe a thing that I know well; following the steps in the sand; I can feel the sea in your precious poem and the burst of waves...I can feel the emotion of the loving people when harmony and majestic sea share thses feelings...Your poem is quite a success. regards yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A beautiful fusion of all that is. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and then all things are one sensation enjoyed your art ms... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Neptune smiles, Margharita. Ida |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
The allure of the sea is irresistible, as are the lines of this magnificent poem! I am drawn, as surely as if by the undulating tides, unto all things eternal. Beautiful! art |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
what amazing imagery....I really felt the ocean |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - my first thoughts were of peace watching the surf, others were of the delightful words of this write... BC |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
The beach of tenderness is calling me I turn around and I see your face. Beautiful Margherita. Love, Hal |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A beautiful poem Margherita. The sea is like love itself. Both serene and playful, benevolent and wrathful, endless and fathomless. Do we play upon the water's edge, or dare we take the plunge? Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends. I so enjoyed all of your kind replies. Love, Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The sun and you. The sky and you. The sea and you. The shore and you. The world and you. Your dance of freedom and me, the voice of love within your heart, whispering silently. . . . . . Beautiful romantic setting for the body of water and the whole piece was a pleasure to read. Eric |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
'Twas a beautiful scene you described there! I really enjoyed the poem. That really made my day when I almost decided to abhor poetry. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, Let's hope it lasts a very long time. I wouldn't bet on eternity though. Our world is always changing, sometimes for the better, sometimes for the worse. Remember, we used to be one big land mass, so many years ago. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Eric, dear Jonathan and dear Bobby, for your loving replies. Bobby, I meant the soul. Love, Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, How you draw me in with the beauty web you weave for us. I love how you partner pictures and words. And I love how your mind creates wonderful. Love, Alison |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there's a beautiful melody to this lovely serenade...nice imagery...well written |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Margherita what a wonderful imagination you have and then to put it down on paper is a talent indeed. Take a bow dear Lady. Love Lindsay |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Such a beautiful write. The imagery is wonderful. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Alison, dear Steaven, dear Lindsay and dear Stephen, thank you from my heart for your most kind comments! Love, Margherita |
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