Open Poetry #44 |
Shandamaire |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Shandamaire Beyond the dark t’ward light of day There is a land far, far away This place is known as Shandamaire A little castle’s nestled there Around this castle dark and tall There is a garden still and small The flowers there no longer bloom Within their little garden room But it was not so long ago That you could see the flowers grow The blossoms there were bold and bright While welcoming the morning light T’was then a princess young and fair Strolled the grounds of Shandamaire All of the birds and creatures small Would answer to her lilting call The princess loved her favorite toys A dancing doll that brought her joys With a button where one eye had been And a sturdy soldier made of tin The kingdom loved the charming lass With hair of gold and skin like glass And everything was perfect there In the lovely land of Shandamaire Then came an evil prince one day To steal the princess’s land away At first he tried to win her heart But with her land she would not part He decided then to make her leave So as the kingdom knelt to grieve He’d take it for his very own And seat himself upon its throne He chased the girl with golden hair Through hallways in the castle there Out to the garden she did flee And begged the prince to let her be The soldier and the dancing doll Heard their tiny princess call And hurried to the garden path To stop the evil prince’s wrath Next to the garden’s old stone wall The princess saw the dancing doll But the doll and soldier were too late To save her from her awful fate The evil prince gave her a shove And rocks fell down from up above The sturdy soldier made of tin Kept the wall from falling in But while he held the wall in place A smile came to the prince’s face He took the girl with golden hair And left the land of Shandamaire And now within the garden small A rusting soldier holds a wall Through winter snow and summer rains Sturdy and stout he still remains And high atop that garden wall Are the remnants of a dancing doll Its face you see is never dry As a tear falls from its button eye Eternally they stand and wait For their princess by the garden gate And if you look they still are there In the far off land of Shandamaire |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Steven, You mean rotten stuffs happening in Shandamaire? I certainly hope not. This is fine writing. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a beautiful, sad story with more to it than meets the eye. I hope someday there will be a happy ending. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Off with that evil prince's head! Lovely little tale.....Well crafted. Held me to the page rushing to the finale.....So sad. Eric |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is so sadly wonderful. I love this story. A |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A lovely poem, yet sad. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your fairy tale poems are among the best of this genre that I have every read. You know I'm a fan of all your writing, but your fairy tales really appeal to the little girl in me. Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I read this, Steve, my thoughts were drawn to the fantasy of Oz and its land. As you know, Frank Baum based his story on the lead stories of his own time, based on the banking and railroad matters, factory work, and political candidates of his day. I thought for a moment you were going down a similar road. Truly enjoyed it as a children's poem, and also I'm fairly well convinced some underlying overtones of "other worldly matters". Good job! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My good friend Steve, you are in a class of your own when it comes to fairy tales for that was a delight to read and read again. Top accolades for that one. Thank you. Lindsay |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A sad, sweet story, told by a master! Enjoyed immensely, Steaven! art |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I, too, enjoyed it as if it were a children's book, complete with vivid illustrations and colorful pages...very nicely done |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a fantastic tale, but you must write the sequel please, we want to know about the fate of the princess with golden hair. You are a master in fairy tales, no doubt, dear Stephen. Love, Margherita |
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