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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-01-01 12:27 PM

Missing Pages

Every day
I turn back to my past
Feeling emotions today
Feeling so sad
Feeling lost
Feeling so sad
Feeling so bad
Looking back it's hurts
I am just in love with you
Now it's just in a name
Never been the same
The words you wrote it
long back
on my mind
Being myself
Losing my mind
faith on you
Missing pages of my life
Looking at each page
As I turn
Each time
I feel so lost in a memory of you
looking at this book
Where I slowly turn the pages
As I read them
I find them some missing pages
It has been ages
Missing pages

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2009-01-01 12:34 PM

I really liked the missing pages theme Vandana, like that incomplete book, or life.

Terrific writing!
I hope this new year bring you a whole new chapter of joy, full, and intact.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-01-01 08:30 PM

Vandana,

I hope that one day when you are flipping back that all the missing pieces have been filled in. I really enjoy your poetry - you show so much of what is churning inside you.

Happy New Year - may it bring you all you wish for.

Alison

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-01-02 04:04 AM

I like the theme too, vandana. I always read your writing.
Ida

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2009-01-02 02:43 PM

such a nostalgic romanticism...nice write

mandamaywhoviay
Junior Member

since 2009-01-02

Posts 12

5 posted 2009-01-03 11:16 AM

Wow, this is very good.
I really like the theme of it, it makes me think outside the box, and get a better understanding on your situation.
very, very good.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2009-01-03 02:27 PM

Love the title of this.

Very nicely expressed Vandana.....I enjoyed the read.

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2009-01-03 02:43 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

The construction of this poem is interesting. I like the thoughts a lot.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-01-03 10:47 PM

vandana - this is one of your better writings in my opinion. Full of heartfelt feelings and words to express them. Well done...

BC

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2009-01-04 04:10 AM

enlightening metaphor, enjoyed it.

yann

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2009-01-04 08:05 AM

VanDana~
Hello lovely gal~
Always nice to see your lovely thoughts on the blue pages~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2009-01-04 10:00 PM

Wonderful Vandana... Happy New Year my lovely friend ...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Zaineb
Junior Member

since 2009-05-22

Posts 27
Denmark

12 posted 2009-05-22 09:41 AM

Wow, i know it's long time ago you wrote this, but it is really good, I just want to tell that this one of the best i have read on this site

it say so much

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