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Open Poetry #44

Love's Rushing In...

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

0 posted 2009-02-04 06:27 PM

Love's Rushing in...

Travelling at 186,000 miles per second
is the light in the night from Lightning
which blasts the molecules of air apart
to create a vacuum most frightening.
But it's not heated air being pushed apart
that makes that clamorous din.
After Lightning has struck
and the vacuum collapses,
Thunder is the air rushing in.

And the X-chromosome lies waiting alive
in the female egg with grace
for the first sperm penetrating its membrane
bringing spark for a Life to embrace.
If an X sperm is first, it will be a girl.
If a Y, it's a boy to win.
And it's not your choice or mine but God's
that gender is the sperm rushing in.

When one Heart is enraptured by another
and they both hold their breaths in the night
and the vacuum between them draws closer
for one heartbeat at the speed of Light,
all Thunder heard then at the speed of sound
on a whisper of air so thin
at 11 hundred and 29 feet per second
is the blast of Love rushing in.

Namyh

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-02-04 06:37 PM

Thanks for the science ~ and love ~ lessons.

Now if science was taught like this, I would have had straight A's!!!

A de-light-ful ~ and informative ~ read!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-02-05 05:57 PM

Wow, I loved all this rushing in. So neat!
Very captivating write!

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2009-02-06 12:03 PM

so Michio-esque...interesting write

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-02-06 12:46 PM

Enjoyed...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-02-06 02:28 AM

Well, this is an interesting view of love, I like it.
Ida

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

6 posted 2009-02-08 05:11 AM

Earth Angel – If science and love were taught like this, I never would have cut so many classes or have to take them over again.LOL. Thanks Earth Angel. You get an “A” in my book. Namyh

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