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mein or meree thanhai Junior Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 21 |
Birds spit out fire Even rain burns skin Bleeding heads embellishing road Machine insects hunting naive Weeping child on mother's grave sharpen your ears, pale vibrating and mouthful soab None now to speak for me... |
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Jax Nova Junior Member
since 2009-02-04
Posts 20OK |
Very interesting. This makes me think of a sci-fi/fantasy book! I can already see a story forming in my head.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm not sure what soab means, but the gist of it all felt like war. Interesting write. Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a very special message! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
man's inventions have no humanity ...the metal birds ..the metal insects ... the chemical rain.... man's inventions have no humanity. I will speak for them . You have spoken for them. We will speak for them. Dear dear Mein or meree thanhai. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad I'd say... "None now to speak for me"..... How hatred leads to such heartache..... Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The imagery is painful, and all too real. May they all find the path to Peace. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have described modern warfare painfully well...regrettably...and yet on a more cheerful note...welcome to PiP...will be looking for more |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice -Juju |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for letting me know that you mean to write "sob". Makes all the difference!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful take on that horrible situation! I hope that the younger generations of both nations will see the folly of it all and overcome hate and plant peace. Love, Margherita |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Powerful and poignant. This ongoing conflict almost empties the breast of hope, but a solution must be found. Blessed are the peacemakers. art |
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mein or meree thanhai Junior Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 21 |
thanks a lot for everyone who insire me here, my first poem. my legs shivered when i post this here..., now im more more confident, exited |
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