Open Poetry #44 |
Cursed by the Moon |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
In a forest of silent trees A ruined man falls to his knees He screams to an empty sky above ‘Quicken the heartbeat of my love!’ He cradles her in a trembling grip Her chest remains a bloody rip He will recall this blackened day She strokes his face then slips away To lie upon a bracken bed Her face serene as she lies dead Her last words ‘Love, I forgive’ ‘And with my blessing you must live’ The night before he had a dream A fit of madness it had seemed A pack of wolves had chased a man Across a barren frozen land As a shadow flitted 'cross the moon A fell voice sneered ‘You’ll be mine soon’ ‘To serve and suffer grief and worse’ ‘You shall bear an unholy curse!’ ‘By day you’ll live among your kind’ ‘By night I’ll take your soul, your mind!’ ‘A monstrous beast you will become’ ‘Prey on the lost. My will be done!’ As madness it had been dismissed But the full moon was the catalyst His true love he met by the lake He should have heeded for her sake As the pale moon rose above the clouds His love began to scream aloud He had become a dreadful beast His mind gone tore into her breast As she fell limp to die bleeding The full moon had begun receding Beneath the canopy of leaves A man again he weeps and grieves Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A compelling and tragic story! ~ and exceptionally well-told! It held my rapt attention from beginning to end. That must have been the reason my parents had warned me not to date any werewolves! Great write! Great read! EA |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thanks for the response EA. I had worried about this not being the appropriate forum. I wrote how he recieved the curse from a dream I experienced when I was eleven, but don't worry. I'm not a werewolf, so feel quite free to date me. :P Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...an old Lon Chaney movie began to play in my mind as I read this...a good write...a vivid memory...and I (for one) am glad you are not a werewolf. Probably makes your whole life a lot easier. |
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