Open Poetry #44 |
Worn out trinkets of Remember |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Morning spins regret as kisses slip beneath the twilight snow the skies surmise in thought and premonition what clearly ills the the grungy stands of night glued shut, romance thrice etched, in lusted frenzy stumps of smoking ash underaged merlot and stockings shed a color palette freshly spills with tattered tales crumpled in postmodern fallout summer's shrunken daisies falter in the unexpected both of snows and courtships never written in prominance never meant to weather hence the pause between the gifts and the mourning porridge of whatever with slipping trinkets of remember [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-04-2009 10:04 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The more I read it the more it unravels its mighty charm. You have created such an intense atmosphere, dear Michele Poetess. Btw. did I tell you that your book has arrived finally and I cherish it greatly. It is filled with outstanding creations! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Wonderful write! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Book? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Like Margherita ~ I too have enjoyed your book! It is wonderful to have a collection of your poetic thoughts! With this poem, you have created the intoxicating atmosphere so vividly, that I almost feel like a voyeur! There's liquid gold in your pen! Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed the picture painted here. |
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