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Open Poetry #44

Determined I Shall Be

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-02-03 07:45 AM

Determined I Shall Be

Keeping myself optimistic
Each day begins anew
Looking on the bright side
That's what I had to do

Erasing negative thoughts
So doubts will dissapear
In knowing I have patience
I continued to persevere

Persistance always helps
In using determination
I'm never one for giving up
Whatever the situation

In believing all is possible
That is so true of me
Everyday I remind myself
Determined I shall be

Hope©2009

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-02-03 08:04 AM

I liked this one. moves beautifully through the mind,
Excellently written...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-02-03 10:08 AM

Very wise message in this beautiful write, dear Hope!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2009-02-03 11:41 PM

Great wisdom in this...enjoyed.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-02-04 02:12 AM

High Hope

An excellent reminder for us all to look on the bright side of life!
Your smile ~ begets smiles! Your poems always
touch me. Your own beauty comes shining through your poetry.

Love 'n a hug,
Linda

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

5 posted 2009-02-04 05:54 PM

HopeS - That's the spirit. In today's world, determination is a big asset. Thanks for reminding us with your poetic upliftment to use it. Very well done and inspirational. Namyh

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2009-02-05 01:22 PM

Very wise, Hope.
Ida

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2009-02-05 02:08 PM

go girl!

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

8 posted 2009-02-05 02:25 PM

Hope, this is such a simple yet deep and thoughtful expression of determination. I loved it.

I would like to send it to my Sister-in-Law. I think she would get a lot out of it.

WT.

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