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Open Poetry #44

Wishing to Speak French

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-02-02 05:31 PM

Wishing to Speak French

Only two eternal lovebirds
could fly away to the Eiffel Tower
upon the wings of angels,
to dine at Le Jules Verne Restaurant
on the towers second level,
sharing special times of
champagne and French wines
while enjoying the towers twinkling lights
on cool romantic nights,
spending a Valentine's day and night
in the magnificent City of Paris.
Tres magnifique!!!

JamesLee
01February
2009

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2009-02-02 05:33 PM

How wonderful! Great write, too...k

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2009-02-02 06:17 PM

NICE!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-02-03 04:12 AM

I think you have just expressed beautifully how it feels when love is there and when it is enough to be able to say "je t'aime" in that very special atmosphere.

Very lovely, romantic and nostalgic.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-02-03 06:52 AM

This is so cute and there is such a romance in your poem...You reveal the essence of a romantic city with beautiful and precise words....A very enjoyable read.

bienvenue

yann

Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

5 posted 2009-02-03 10:54 AM

Yes, Paris is a beautifully romantic city indeed. I went there once, a long time ago. Your verse revived in me some nice memories

Mark

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

6 posted 2009-02-03 08:11 PM

I have closed my eyes.I am there too.
merci monsieur

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2009-02-03 08:20 PM

Yo James,

That sound real good to me. I always liked Paris during my working days.

Now I'm here in Philadelphia, the Paris of America.

Bobby

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