Open Poetry #44 |
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Another Star in Heaven (for Marge) |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA ![]() |
Another Star in Heaven Look at the gathering sky, as the dark sun slowly falls, And listen of whispering shadows, tis the evening calls, As twilight pushes up the sun, each morning starts anew, We count our every days delight, each storm or wind that blew, Our lives are given to the Earth, yet of which they came, But our souls are a gift of Heaven, A star with out a name, We choose our paths and lift the cross, burdens we will share, And weave in to our tapestry, friend’s sorrows we must bear. Yet when our time on Earth is done, our pains and sorrows quell, On Angel wings, our spirits glide, with a heavenly chorus swell, Tonight a new light shines for us, its brilliance we recognize, For our dear departed loved one, is the brightest star in the skies. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. [This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (02-03-2009 03:44 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a very lovely write in memory of our dear Marge. It warms the heart to realize how much she was actually loved by all here. Love, Margherita |
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TRACE2RYM Junior Member
since 2008-10-09
Posts 38 |
This is really nice, Dad, I have read so many wonderful tributes to Marge. I wish I could have known her and read more of her poetry. See ya soon, Trace. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
A very kind tribute to a very special lady. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am grateful that Larry bumped up this tender rendering from your heart for our beloved Marge. I had missed it and am touched by the beauty of your ink ~ and heart. So beautifully penned. So apt and true. God bless her ~ and you, Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm glad this got bumped up too ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes ![]() what a lovely tribute to Marge. I really miss her. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautifully peaceful write, and great tribute to Marge's memory. Thank you for sharing this. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is so nice. Beautiful write. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
I did not know Marge but I do know that this a beautiful peace of work. I am proud of you. Love Mom, (Billie) |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
I don't know who Marge was but I do know this a beautiful |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Billye, I'm sorry you didn't get to know Marge. She was special... and I miss her so much it's still hard to read the tributes written for her. I'm glad this was bumped back up... it's beautiful, Tracey... even if I have to read through tears. |
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