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If words were colurs.
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If words were colurs. |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
If words were colours I'd splash them about I'd flick them at you I'd press my fingertips in thick globs I'd twirl my brush sadly through Mixing shades. Standing back to admire I'd ponder the reflections Mirrored in your eyes. "Paint me", you would beg And I would.... In silvered gold. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Holy [edited by Moderator]. Great poem. Nice work, -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-02-2009 02:18 PM).] |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
dear Vik Thank you. That is my first reply... ever Your comments will stay with me always. Sigh. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
welcome to pip! that was a beautiful first post.  looking forward to reading more from you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely idea of splashing around with colors. Effectful. Welcome to Pip! Love, Margherita |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Aw! Don't sigh at me... Unless of course, It was a pleasant sigh. I really did enjoy this piece, it's simple and concise, but brings with it a great emotional and visual payload. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to PiP. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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mein or meree thanhai Junior Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 21 |
boshii...., the words speak ur feelings..., it can undrstnd more a person who said once.... paint me.... i know it well.... coz the words like rain.. spread all over without a harmony... but it makes music... a beautiful poem...., trust me.... it hunt me.... my soul... as a night rain.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Boshii2 - nice to read your first post, and nice write... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Great first post Boshii2. Hope to see much more of your unique talent. Ida |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
thank you all for the welcoming encouragement, Boshii2 |
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