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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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Fathomless your ocean eyes The crystal waters that I swim On the horizon my sunrise The perfect soul that lies within Endless depth of waters pure Buoyed afloat by gentle tides Grant a warming love that’s sure Tranquillity your soul confides Sweep me clear from the shoals Of displeasure’s breaking wrath In endless oceans make me whole In passion’s storm love’s aftermath Blissful waves that lap at beaches Of my yearning ocean love The plea of my heart beseeches Ever be sunshine above Fathomless your ocean heart Magnificent your pearly crown And ever should we drift apart Buoyed no more by love I’ll drown Dedicated to Shannon, my beloved Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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AlexG Junior Member
since 2009-01-31
Posts 10 |
I really like how you used the ocean as a metaphore... really nice poem... |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Truly eloquent and what a superb dedication for your loved one. vic |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
quote: This is very beautiful, and i love this stanza I think a lot of people can identify with this Excellently written...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suncleaver - I like the words in this writing, well done... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a lovely romantic write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sincerely nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What woman wouldn't want to have poetry as beautiful and as adoring as this, written for her?!? Simply lover-ly!  EA |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you very much ladies and gentlemen. It's truly special to share work with such wonderful poets, and my beloved is always overjoyed to see these links. She's watching you guys too, although she doesn't write poetry, she writes prose. I've been pestering her to join and post since I did. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You tell Shannon that we have a place for her lovely prose, just as we have several places for poetry such as yours. It's wonderful...thanks for sharing such a special poem...and such a special lady! |
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